You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Vanesa Fransiska, and I

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years old

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. I am writing to you to inquire about to possibility of working in your company. I have noticed that your company is looking for head office. I graduated from Universitas Binus at Bandung with

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a degree

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of Bachelor of Business in

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interested

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to work in here

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for

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six months because

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my major and

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an

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experience

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here. I could

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my work, by I will do it with responsibility. I hope that you can accept me as a head operational in your company. Best Regard Vanesa Fransiska