You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam
My name is Vanesa Fransiska, and I
24
years oldAdd a missing verb
am 24
and
. I am writing to you to inquire about to possibility of working in your company. I have noticed that your company is looking for head office. I graduated from Universitas Binus at Bandung with Correct word choice
apply
degree
of Bachelor of Business in Add an article
a degree
the degree
this
year. I interested
to work in here Add a missing verb
am interested
during
six months because Change preposition
for
according to
my major and get
Wrong verb form
getting
an
experience Correct article usage
apply
in
here.
I could Change preposition
apply
be done
my work, by I will do it with responsibility. I hope that you can accept me as a head operational in your company.
Best Regard
Vanesa FransiskaWrong verb form
do
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task response
Ensure that you fully address the prompt and provide a clear explanation for why you want to work in the company's head office for six months.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a more logical structure with appropriate paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and appropriate words and phrases.
grammatical range
Review and practice grammar to improve accuracy and range.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,