In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taking a gap year before starting university

Nowadays, it is increasingly becoming the trend to take a break from

the

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studying

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study

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for a year after completing

their

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apply

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school

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because of

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apply

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work, or travel. Though it has some bad effects on his career, the positive outcomes are more. If a student takes

break

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a break

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in his

study

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after

school

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, he will lose the continuity of the

study

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.

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, if he

come

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after completing

this

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intentional break he might not get the proper flow of

study

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.

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, it is seen that they are not continuing the

study

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as they are not getting

interest

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interested

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on

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in

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it after taking the break. It,

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, is the toughest task for them to become regular in education. Even, they never go for higher

studies

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.

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, most of the students of poor countries start work after completing

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apply

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school

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, but

do

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apply

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never back in

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studies

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their studies

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.

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, there are many advantages of taking breaks between

studies

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. They give

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them the

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opportunity to the pupils for earning money and experience, which are crucial for their

study

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and work. If they go

for

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on

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different tours, they can gather knowledge of different cultures,

as well as

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get the opportunity to learn different updated systems, which might

helpful

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be helpful

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for their career. If they take the gap for

working

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work

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, they can earn money, which will helpful for them to invest in their next

studies

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and

also

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gather knowledge on different modern systems, which might helpful for them to

take

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make

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the decision of subject choice in the university.

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, they can take

the

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apply

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advantages

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advantage

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of choosing their own career

according to

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their

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the

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demand of

advanced

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the advanced

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world.

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, students

of

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from

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developed countries are taking these advantages, and continuing their

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study

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studies

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. In conclusion, it can be said that

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there are some demerits,

such

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as

lose

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loss

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of continuity and

drop

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dropping

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out from higher

study

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,

of

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or

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taking

the

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a

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break between completing

school

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and starting university, the merits, like earning money and choosing

desirable

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a desirable

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subject, are higher.

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, I

belief

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believe

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on

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in

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taking breaks between

studies

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.