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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the information on US families'
income
 in 3 different years.
Overall
, the number of four classes fluctuated over 8 years,
while
 the only class of
people
 who earned between 75,000 to 99,999 remained the lowest.On top of that,
people
 whose
income
 is higher than 100,000 experienced a peak which had never been seen in
this
 period. Looking at the chart more closely, it is significant to note that the figures for
people
 who earned between 25000 to 49999 overtook the first place in 2011. After that year, the
people
 whose
income
 was higher than 1000,000 saw an obvious rise, by 10
million
.
In addition
, the class of
people
 earned between which was around 15
million
 on average in these three years.
However
, the
people
 whose
income
 was between 50,000 to 74,999 and 75,000 to 99,999 were relatively stable, which was about 20
million
 and 15
million
 respectively.
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