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The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The table gives information on changes that happened in different types of households and
families
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 in Canada between 1984 and 2020.
Overall
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, it is evident that the amount of traditional
families
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 with both parents and dependent
children
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 decreased over the years. Compared to 1984, when slightly over half of all people in Canada had dependent
children
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 in one-family households, in 2020 these amounts dropped to 36 per
cent
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 respectively.
In contrast
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,
families
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 tend to have no
children
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 more often. The percentage of
this
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 increased by 6 per
cent
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 in the period given.
However
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, the percentage of non-dependent
children
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 in
families
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 remained relatively steady and fluctuated slightly decreasing to 9% in 2020. Surprisingly, the amount of single-person households doubled throughout the period from 6 to 12 per
cent
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. When it comes to lone parenting, these numbers grew dramatically from 4 to 12 per
cent
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 towards the end of the period.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, children, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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