The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the count of American families by their earnings for a year in the
years
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of 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it is seen that the majority of the
households
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earned above 100,000 dollars for a year and that
this
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count
raised
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between
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over
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the
years
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.
On the other hand
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, the other four categories remained approximately the same in all of the
years
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. Around 30
million
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families in the US gained more than 100,000 American dollars in 2007.
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number slightly declined in 2011 and in 2015 there was a peak of more than 30
million
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households
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with that income. The lowest proportion of numbers of houses, fluctuating around 15
millions
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million
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, were paid between 75,000 and 99,999 dollars in all of the
years
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given. The number of
households
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with incomes in the gaps under 25,000, between 25,000 and 49,999, and between 50,000 and 74,999 remained around the same in all three
years
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. They were just about a quarter
million
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, slightly under 30
million
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and around 20
million
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households
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, households, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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