You are in a hospital with a broken leg. Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts. Write a letter to them and include: Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

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Dear Companions, I hope all of you are doing well. I am carrying out fine as well. I do not have any words to explain how grateful I am to have you all in my life. Thank you for all the lovely messages and gifts. I really love those notes which was a token of love to me.
Moreover
, you all know,that I am living a difficult life right now and waiting badly to go home. I have become bored not only having the same food every day but
also
surrounded by the walls of the hospital.
Although
my relatives come every day to see me, I am still missing my corporate life.
However
, it is a matter of ray that I am getting better gradually.
Furthermore
, I am getting back sense in my leg and now I can move my leg without hurting myself.
In addition
, my doctor said, I can go home next Monday.
Hence
, I believe, I can join the office from 1st December. I can't wait to see and hug you all. Please keep praying for my recovery. Thanks again for everything you guys have done for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Take my unconditional love. Warm regards, Lisa
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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