The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how the floor layout of a common library looked twenty years ago and how she looks at the present.
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, it can be seen that the main purpose of the change in those two decades was
due to
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the creation of a more child-friendly atmosphere and the development of more technological and shared experiences. The child sector was located in the upper
right
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corner of the entrance which is now relocated and expanded at the opposite left angle. There are now two new sofas in
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area and a spot for storytelling events. The enquiry desk, which was exactly on the
right
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of the doorway, is now turned into a coffee shop. There are new computer and lecture rooms at the two opposite corners left,
right
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from the left of the entry and at the upper
right
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of the floor. A new information desk and self-service machines for ticket purchases and book returns, placed between
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area and the lecture room, are established.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words right with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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