You have recently read a newspaper article about your school friend whom you did not hear about for a long time. Write a letter to the newspaper editor highlighting some article details. Ask for some information about your friend.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing a letter about
classmate
who appeared in your newspaper.
Whenever I read the daily newspaper I see Add an article
a classmate
must
Correct your spelling
most
the
article section. Change preposition
of the
Besides
this
, lots
of information I acquired from different topics. When I read today's newspaper I saw my friend Harry's picture on the front page Correct quantifier usage
lot
alongwith
his details. Correct your spelling
along with
Although
, he had moved to Correct word choice
However
UK
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the UK
for working
and I have not seen Change preposition
to work
to
him Change preposition
apply
from
2 years.
The information is mentioned of my colleague that he has missed from his house Change preposition
for
from
three months. The police Change preposition
for
is
being searched Change the verb form
are
to
him when his Change preposition
for
famiy
reported. He had not contacted anyone with his family and friends. The police Correct your spelling
family
has
Change the verb form
have
also
investigated with neighbours or office staff but nobody seen to
him. Verb problem
saw
Furthermore
, who
find Correct determiner usage
those who
to
Harry the police will Change preposition
apply
give
an award.
I want to Wrong verb form
be given
inquire from
you to provide me Verb problem
ask
information
Change preposition
with information
his
address and family contact number so I Change preposition
on his
will
be in touch with him. If you do.so for me it will Verb problem
can
really
helpful to find my friend.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,Add a missing verb
be really
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task response
Ensure that the letter is focused on asking for information about your friend, rather than providing unnecessary details.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a clear and logical manner. Consider using paragraphs to separate different points.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express your thoughts more accurately and effectively. Use synonyms and varied sentence structures.
grammatical range
Improve your grammar by paying attention to sentence construction and word order.
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