You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

in some countries bully is one of the

issue

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in schools, which has

impact

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an impact

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on

others

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other

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students maybe is because of

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their

thier

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their

family backgrounds

also

relating to mental

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issues

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,

i

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believe that we can sort

out

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by providing some rules

as well as

encouraging them to work on themselves to be better , we have a number of causes of

bulling

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bullying

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but

i

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would like to talk about two of them once is refers to

genetic

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that has a big role

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children's performances , if they have a bad family or toxic friends who they are all angry or

aggresive

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aggressive

be sure they express

thier

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their

feeling by fighting with others ,

on the other hand

, some of them have

a mental tensions

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that they can not talk about it .

for instance

,

accourding

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according

to some

researchs

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research

researches

that doing work on

children

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children's

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behaviours they find out a majority of

aggressive

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the aggressive

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child

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children

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come from a big family who

egnore

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ignore

ignored

them. despite

of

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apply

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this

, every

problems

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problem

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have a

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solution

solutions

soulutions

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solution

,even if it is so hard to

resalution

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resolution

, one of the

remedy

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can be giving them some rules that

relating

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to punishment if they do or do not ,

although

we need to tell them consistently about

forbbidn

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forbidden

things ,

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my school had a rule about fighting if someone

involve

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that kind of things we

loss

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our score eventually we tried to avoid against .futhermore

instractors

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instructors

have a quite

responsblity

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responsibility

about teach them how they can be a good member in our

sociaty

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society

by working on themselves

instead

of using social media , in

conclution

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conclusion

,

adolecents sometims

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adolescents sometimes

do

thier

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their

work angrlily because of

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their

thier

parents

nor

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or

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unhealthy mental ,in order to

develope

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develop

our society we have to

mindful

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be mindful

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of them by motivating them to

do

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apply

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not do somethings unusual

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and

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also

helping them to

have

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apply

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focus on

thier

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their

life.