The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The map
display
the difference that Change the verb form
displays
west park secondary
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West Park Secondary School
school
have taken lots of changes from 1950 to 2010.Overall
it is clear that
earlier school
was not have
Change the verb form
did not have
place
for sports and no any space for parking .
Currently,in 1950 houses, Add an article
a place
playground
and farmland Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
attach
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were attached
at
the Change preposition
to
school
and main
road in front of the Change the article
the main
school
.Furthermore
,there were changes in this
place
car park,science block and sports fields were new additions.
According to
the place
,that place
had more develop and
area of car parking was expanded in 2010 Correct your spelling
an
whereas
,playing games area had been short and also
play ground
was Correct your spelling
playground
too
small and main road was still there Add an article
the too
as well as
Add an article
the
school
building was as It is.Submitted by rs55169611 on
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