"Write a letter to your neighbour to ask him/her to take care of your house while you are away for a week on holiday. Please say •Explain where you are going and why. • What do you need him/her to do? • What should he/she do in case of emergency?"
Dear Sneha, Hope
this
letter finds you in a
great health. I am writing Remove the article
apply
this
letter in regard to request you if you don't mind for
taking care of my Change preposition
apply
house
next week
as I am going to Spain for a vacation. This
will be the most awaiting
trip for all my friends as my best friend is getting merrier next month. We are four friends Wrong verb form
awaited
are
going Correct pronoun usage
who are
to
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on
this
trip forearm whole
Correct article usage
the whole
week
and I will be leaving for a trip on Monday morning and I will be return
on Saturday evening. As you are my only neighbour friend in our society, we have Change the verb form
be returned
be returning
Verb problem
apply
been
known each Unnecessary verb
apply
for
almost two years. Your help would be Correct word choice
other for
grant
, if you have some spare time to look out for my Correct your spelling
great
house
for this
week
. Specifically, you know I have some indoor plants and too
keep Replace the word
to
thelive
and healthy I need your help to water them twice a Correct your spelling
the live
week
whileI
will be away. Correct your spelling
while I
while
Also
, I forget
that I will have Wrong verb form
forgot
duct
cleaning appointment Correct article usage
a duct
during
Change preposition
apply
this
week
on Wednesday, I will try to cancel the appointment but they mentioned that they will not able
to give Add a missing verb
be able
refund
for Add an article
a refund
service
if I cancel my appointment, so unfortunately I have to ask them to come. If any members of your family or you will be available to stay at my Correct article usage
the service
house
during that service, I will be forever greatful
for your help. I put a chart note on a refrigerator how much water Correct your spelling
grateful
pour
into plants and I paid the feed for duct-cleaning, so you don't have to worry about anything. In case of emergency, I will not be available Wrong verb form
poured
due to
international roaming, but I will put my friends's number and Email address on a refrigerator, too. Her phone will be available there. Thank you for your help and support to take care of my house
. I am looking forward to your positive response. Best regards, Urvashi BhavsarSubmitted by bhavsar.urvashi on
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greeting and closing
Ensure that the greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity.
complete response
Provide more specific details about the trip and the friend's wedding.
lexical resource
Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the letter.
grammatical range
Review the sentence structure and grammar to ensure accuracy.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.