"Write a letter to your neighbour to ask him/her to take care of your house while you are away for a week on holiday. Please say •Explain where you are going and why. • What do you need him/her to do? • What should he/she do in case of emergency?"

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Dear Sneha, Hope

this

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letter finds you in

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great health. I am writing

this

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letter in regard to request you if you don't mind

for

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taking care of my

house

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week

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as I am going to Spain for a vacation.

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will be the most

awaiting

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trip for all my friends as my best friend is getting merrier next month. We are four friends

are

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who are

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going

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trip forearm

whole

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the whole

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week

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and I will be leaving for a trip on Monday morning and I will

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on Saturday evening. As you are my only neighbour friend in our society, we have

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been

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known each

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other for

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almost two years. Your help would be

grant

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, if you have some spare time to look out for my

house

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for

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week

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. Specifically, you know I have some indoor plants and

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keep

thelive

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the live

and healthy I need your help to water them twice a

week

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whileI

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while I

while

will be away.

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, I

forget

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that I will have

duct

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a duct

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cleaning appointment

during

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week

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on Wednesday, I will try to cancel the appointment but they mentioned that they will not

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to give

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for

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if I cancel my appointment, so unfortunately I have to ask them to come. If any members of your family or you will be available to stay at my

house

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during that service, I will be forever

greatful

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grateful

for your help. I put a chart note on a refrigerator how much water

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into plants and I paid the feed for duct-cleaning, so you don't have to worry about anything. In case of emergency, I will not be available

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international roaming, but I will put my friends's number and Email address on a refrigerator, too. Her phone will be available there. Thank you for your help and support to take care of my

house

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. I am looking forward to your positive response. Best regards, Urvashi Bhavsar

Submitted by bhavsar.urvashi on Mon Nov 06 2023

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greeting and closing

Ensure that the greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity.

complete response

Provide more specific details about the trip and the friend's wedding.

lexical resource

Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the letter.

grammatical range

Review the sentence structure and grammar to ensure accuracy.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

323 words

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