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You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter -tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it. -describe what you learnt in your current job. -and ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment.

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Dear Sarah, I hope you are well. I am writing to you that I have made my decision to resign after deliberation for a long time. I have discussed my career development plan with you in our regular catchups, and I find that my job in our company cannot fulfil my willingness for a career path
due to
 the limitation of promotion. I really appreciate the experience with our company as I have learned sophisticated auditing knowledge and improved my communication skills regarding working in a global team. My next job is
also
 at a fund management firm;
therefore
, your reference letter will be really convincing and helpful for me to present my skills and experiences to my future employer. I hope you can understand my decision and I really appreciate your guidance and coaching in the
last
 three years. Thanks, and Regards SJ
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coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and concise introduction, mentioning the decision immediately and the reason for it.
coherence cohesion
Organize the content in a clear and logical manner, using paragraphs effectively to present different ideas.
lexical resource
Add more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and ensure accurate use of grammar.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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