The table shows information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets
The table gives information about how much
amount
of gallons of fuels
, pounds, and Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
flight
per hour spent in famous several types of private Fix the agreement mistake
flights
aircratf
. Correct your spelling
aircraft
Overall
, Gulfstream has the biggest amount
of carbon
dioxide
(Ibs
) while
it shares the same flight cost with two other types, similarly
to Learjet 60 and Hawker 400XP.
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similar
Firstly
, regarding the type of jets spending 6,750 in Add an article
the dollar
a dollar
dollar
, Gulfstream brings out the biggest Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
amount
of carbon
dioxide
with 10,078 (Ibs
) while
Gulfstream 550 releases 8,342 (Ibs
) of carbon
dioxide
, and Challenger 605 has the smallest amount
of carbon
dioxide
brought
among the two which is 6,180 (Wrong verb form
brings
Ibs
).
Next,
in the category of the kind of aircraft expending 4,500 in dollar
, Learjet 60 Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
reveales
the biggest Correct your spelling
reveals
revealed
amount
of carbon
dioxide
with 4,613, followed by Cessna Citation XLS with a difference of 111 (Ibs
) with 4,502 (Ibs
), and the last
is Hawker 800XP with 4,149.
Lastly
, Hawker 400XP, Beechet 400, and Cessna CJ ii spend the same flight expenditure (2,700 in dollar
) but has Add an article
the dollar
a dollar
different
Add an article
a different
amount
of pounds of carbon
dioxide
with 4,149, 4,017, adn
3,002 (Correct your spelling
and
Ibs
) respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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