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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#parents #teachers #support
In
this
 day and age, there is much knowledge the child must learn through their
lifes
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lives
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.
That is
 the reason why they need many
teachers
. It is believed that
parents
 are the best
teachers
 for their
children
. I totally agree with that point of view and
this
 essay will discuss and clarify the above option.
To begin
,
parents
 are the best
teachers
 of their
children
 because they are the examples that their
children
 look at and learn from.
Children
 constantly learn things subconsciously from their surroundings, especially their
parents
.
Therefore
,
parents
 always unintentionally teach their
children
 just by setting an example for them. Obviously, they are the most suitable
teachers
 for
children
, especially during the stage of childhood development.
For instance
, If a child sees his father loving his mother, he will automatically love his mother
as well as
 everyone in the family.
In addition
,
Children
 will be taught morality, integrity and principles by their
parents
 from an early age. From the moment
children
 begin interacting with others, they internalize and form
this
 perception of right and wrong, so the sooner they can sort it out, the better.
For example
,
children
 who receive care and moral education from their
parents
 early on will be more likely to become good and responsible
children
 right from elementary school. In conclusion,
parents
 are the best
teachers
 of their
children
 because they are the first
teachers
 and are the examples that their
children
 look at and follow every day.
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