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A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Title:
Success
 Vs
Money
 In
this
 time, the richest
people
 are identified as the most successful
people
 in the society. The
money
 is used as tool to measure the
success
 of the
people
. We cant completely disagree on
this
, beacuse the whole education system revolves around
this
 Philosophy. But in my view, i differ from using the
money
 as the tool and would like to consider the purpose or the goal of the individual to measure the
success
. The person who dedicated his major life to attain his goal are the successful person and
money
 is always the by
product
 of attaining the goal successfully.
For example
, the entrepreneurs are focused on attaining their vision to build their successful
product
 where the revenue is the by
product
 of it. There is always big difference between the
people
 who inherited wealth vs the
people
 who built everthing from scatch. You can take away everything from the person who built from scratch and in most of the times, he would able to build it back. Conclusion: In conclusion, i strongly believe the most successful
people
 are the
people
 who attained their goals successfully and
money
 is just the by
product
.
Also
, we should not use
money
 as the tool to measure the
success
.
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