Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.

Dear Mrs Barrett, I found an advert in

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that you are looking

someone

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for someone

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to help

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next summer. I am Shoaib and

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I

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am a university student, i can help you

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this

season, as

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have enough free time

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this

summer

due to

semester break. So , I can help you to perform daily errands, i am a good driver so

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can assist

to make

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in making

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your commute comfortable,

also

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an

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occassional

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occasional

chef so

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can

asssit

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assist

in

kitchen

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as well. Actually , I have to pay my upcoming semester fee so

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was looking to do some paid work to address that need,

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found myself

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right person for

this

job as

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have practical experience

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performing

this

kind of assistance since

my

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high school.

Although

, there will be no classes in summer

but

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i

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will not be free the whole day so

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can spare myself between 9am to 1pm or 6pm to 9pm , as

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have study

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to finish,

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live by your block so commuting will not be an issue for me.