The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how many
tourists
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travelled to a Caribbean
island
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during 2010 and 2017. Some of them decided to stay on cruise ships,
whereas
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others remained on
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island
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the island
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. Generally speaking, the
number
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of travellers visiting a Caribbean
island
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rose consistently throughout the seven-year period. The
number
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of
visitors
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staying on cruise ships climbed about three times by the
end
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of 2017,
while
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the
number
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of travellers choosing to remain on
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island
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quadrupled.
To begin
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with, the
number
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of
visitors
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who chose to stay on cruise ships fluctuated over
three-year
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a three-year
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period, and
then
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it started to rise from just 0.5
million
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visitors
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in 2013 to 1.5
million
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tourists
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by the
end
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of 2017, which tripled from 2010. In
similar
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a similar
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fashion, the total
number
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of people visiting a Caribbean
island
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climbed by 2.5
million
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travellers from 1
million
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tourists
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in 2010 to 3.5
million
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tourists
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in 2017. Alongside
this
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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remained stable at about 0.75
million
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visitors
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between 2010 and 2011. Afterwards, it increased discernibly to 1.5
million
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visitors
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by the
end
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of 2013.
However
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, it remained constant again during 2013 and 2015 and dropped to under 1.5
million
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visitors
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in 2016, but it experienced growth in the subsequent year, making up a total of 2017 by the
end
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of 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, visitors, end, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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