The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the
amount
of gym Use synonyms
memberships
between 1980 and 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that throughout the given period both quantities fluctuated, Linking Words
however
, for women the Linking Words
amount
grew and for men dramatically declined.
At the beginning of the period, the number of men’s Use synonyms
memberships
was double the Use synonyms
amount
of those of women, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
at the end
of the period the situation changed and women’s Linking Words
memberships
were more than double the number of men’sUse synonyms
ones
.
When it comes to gym Correct pronoun usage
apply
memberships
for men, those experienced two high points of 4000 and 5000 in 1985 and 2005 respectively and continued to be higher than those for women. Use synonyms
However
, during 1995, the men’s membership number dropped significantly and reached a low point of approximately 1500. Meanwhile, the women’s Linking Words
amount
reached a peak of 3000 in the same year.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, memberships with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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