Some people view teenager conflicts with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whist others see it something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that
conflicts
between Use synonyms
parents
and Use synonyms
children
are essential in Use synonyms
child’s
growth development, Correct article usage
a child’s
while
others insist that Linking Words
conflicts
between them are harmful Use synonyms
for
their relationship. Change the preposition
to
This
essay strongly agrees with the statement Linking Words
with
the former position and explains why Change preposition
of
conflicts
between them play a crucial role in Use synonyms
the
growth.
Correct article usage
apply
Conflicts
between Use synonyms
parents
and Use synonyms
children
should be avoided because there is a Use synonyms
way
to communicate. If Use synonyms
parents
understand their Use synonyms
childs’
Change noun form
child’s
feeling
and spend enough time to communicate, Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
then
Linking Words
children
will listen to Use synonyms
parents
’ words with respect. Use synonyms
For instance
, many experts Linking Words
of
education insist that Change preposition
in
conflicts
Use synonyms
determinate
the circumstances and can be the one Replace the word
determine
way
to ruin their relationships. Even if I partly acknowledge Use synonyms
this
point of view, I still consider struggles with them Linking Words
aren’t
the things that people can avoid.
First of all, I consider conflict Verb problem
as not
situation
can be the one Fix the agreement mistake
situations
way
of self-exposure of Use synonyms
children
. To grow Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
a
right path, Correct article usage
the
children
must expose their thinking and feelings to their Use synonyms
parents
. Because Use synonyms
children
are the Use synonyms
owner
of their Fix the agreement mistake
owners
life
, they must choose their own Fix the agreement mistake
lives
way
. Use synonyms
However
, if they listen only Linking Words
their
Change preposition
to their
parents
’ words, they will regret Use synonyms
about
it in the future. Change preposition
apply
For example
, when I had a chance to choose my university, I just followed my Linking Words
parents
’ choice because I just Use synonyms
don’t
want to have a conflict with them. And now I regret my decision because I know well about Wrong verb form
didn’t
me
than my Correct pronoun usage
myself
parents
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
parents
and Use synonyms
children
are in different Use synonyms
generation
, which means because their environment of growth is not exactly Fix the agreement mistake
generations
same
, their thinking can’t be Correct article usage
the same
same
always.
In conclusion, even if Correct article usage
the same
conflicts
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
between
children
and Use synonyms
parents
can break the relationships, it is essential for several reasons. Use synonyms
Children
can expose their thinking by Use synonyms
conflicts
and they are the only Use synonyms
one
who can make the proper choice for them. Correct pronoun usage
ones
Moreover
, they lived in different Linking Words
environment
, Fix the agreement mistake
environments
Correct word choice
and the
the
thinking Change the word
their
of
Change preposition
apply
them
Correct pronoun usage
apply
can’t
be Wrong verb form
couldn’t
same
exactly, which follows Correct article usage
the same
conflicts
.Use synonyms
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
Your essay partially addresses the task, but more balance is needed in discussing both views before giving your own opinion. Ensure you dedicate equal attention to both perspectives and provide a distinct paragraph for your opinion.
task achievement
Support your main points with specific examples. You offered a personal anecdote about choosing a university, which is good, but more varied illustrations of your arguments would enhance the essay's effectiveness.
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