IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4.5

The maps give information about a university sports court.

The maps give information about a university sports court.
#maps #information #university #sports #court
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The layout illustrates the development of a university sports
court
Use synonyms
 from 1990 to
present
Correct article usage
the present
show examples
. Over the period, the university sports
court
Use synonyms
 saw spectacular developments, with
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
most amenities having been transformed,
while
Linking Words
 Northeast remained unchanged,
this
Linking Words
 changes
to enhance
Change the verb form
enhanced
show examples
 student’s experience. To the Northwest, in 1990 there
is
Wrong verb form
was
show examples
 green space located next to a car park, but
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
 present the green space is converted into a basketball
court
Use synonyms
,
while
Linking Words
 the car park was demolished to make way for the 4 news tennis
court
Use synonyms
. In the southern part of
this
Linking Words
 map, there were 2 tennis courts in 1990 which were fully modernized to a Fitness center.
In addition
Linking Words
, there was a significant change in the north part
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
 university
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
show examples
court
Use synonyms
. The old outdoor pool which was situated next to the coffee shop was reconstructed to become an indoor pool, which will be better for students to swim in bad weather. A relocated and
expanded
Replace the word
expansion
show examples
also
Linking Words
 experienced in the Changing room, they moved the changing room to a new location
that is
Linking Words
 adjacent to the Fitness
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
.
In contrast
Linking Words
, the infrastructure including the coffee shop and reception stayed the same as in 1990.
Submitted by phongnguyenthanh630 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words court with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: