The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the release of CO2 per person in different countries starting from 1967 to 2007
Overall
, the emission
of CO2 in Correct article usage
the UK
UK
and Sweden Correct article usage
the UK
Verb problem
apply
were
dropped, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
in Italy and Portugal the outflow went up throughout the period.
In 1967, the emission
of CO2 in Portugal was approximately 1.2 metric tonnes
then
the trend has
increased and rose to 6 metric Unnecessary verb
apply
tonnes
in 2007. Similarly
, in Italy
the Add a comma
Italy,
co2
outflow was nearly 4 metric Correct your spelling
CO2
tonnes
in 1967 and it showed an upward trend throughout the next years until 2007.
Conversely
, both UK’s
and Sweden’s carbon dioxide release per individual declined from 1977 to 2007. From 1967 to 1977 there was a sharp rise Correct article usage
the UK’s
of
the Change preposition
in
emission
in sweden
approximately to 11 metric Change the capitalization
Sweden
tonnes
then
the
following years it dropped markedly. The Change preposition
in the
co2
Correct your spelling
CO2
emission
in the UK were
the highest throughout the four decades. In 1967, the average outflow was nearly 11 metric Change the verb form
was
tonnes
. However
, this
trend has reduced significantly to 9 metric tonnes
by 2007.Submitted by rinuthomasmathew07 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emission, tonnes with synonyms.
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