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Some people think that students in single sex schools perform better academically others however belive that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the present age,whether
single
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sex
schools
 provide more benefits than mixed
schools
 has sparked much debate. Some people assert that
students
 in
single
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sex
schools
 have better academic achievements,
whereas
 many others argue that mixed
schools
 offer
students
 better social skills for their future.Personally,I am
favour
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 of the latter view. Convincing arguments can be made that mixed
schools
 provide a more comprehensive learning environment for children.To start with,
students
 studying at mixed
schools
 have more chances to communicate with members of the
opposit
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sex
.
In other words
,children learn how to talk to other
gender
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genders
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 at an early age,
therefore
,their social skills would certainly be fostered.
Moreover
,mixed
schools
 give
students
 opportunities to deal with conflicts with the other
gender
 ,which strengthens
students
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students'
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problem solving
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 skills.
For instance
,when a boy has a conflict with a girl at
school
,both of them must learn how to cope.
As a result
,
students
 benefit more if they can learn it sooner.
Lastly
,mixed
schools
 provide
students
 with a
real life
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 scenario where both genders co-exist. Admittedly,
single
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single-sex
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sex
schools
 have fewer
distraction
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distractions
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.The reason for
this
 is if a
school
 has boys or girls,
students
 would not be distracted by members of the opposite
sex
 at
school
,they can focus on their learning.Even so,these
students
 still have access to the other
gender
 after
school
,which means in reality,they must meet the other
gender
 anyway.
Consequently
,the benefits of
single
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sex
schools
 are quite limited. In
conclude
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,I would concede that
single
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single-sex
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sex
schools
 have some advantages.Despite that mixed
schools
 certainly support
students
 in a much better way.
Overall
, I am
covinced
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convinced
 that
student
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students
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 should go to mixed
schools
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