The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps represent the industrial area of Norbinton at present and a plan for future development.
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, the
site
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is planned to be converted
to
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into
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a complete residential one and introduction of other facilities. As a farmland has been separated by a river a novel road has been planned to be built and make it residential too. At the east of the
site
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, a factory would be replaced by a school and at the north-west of the school an introduction of a playground was planned. The
site
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will see a nove facilities in the form of new shops and a medical centre at the south and southwest of the
site
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next to the existing roundabout. All the factories were to be removed and would be replaced by houses for
accomudation
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accommodation
and other purposes. The traffic management could be improved by adding a new
round about
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roundabout
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at the south of the
site
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, and a separate exit from the existing traffic circle would be introduced for new houses toward the north-east.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • site
  • current
  • proposed
  • expand
  • facilities
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • roads
  • business park
  • airport
  • size
  • layout
  • comparisons
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