The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
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The given chart illustrates how much 2 nations spent on goods during 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
UK
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’s total expenditure was more substantial than France's.
Additionally
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, the
UK
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had the lion’s share in the spending on cars, books as well cameras,
whereas
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France spent more on computers and perfume. Regarding the 3 types of goods with
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greater spending, over 350,000
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was spent on cars, books, and cameras in the
UK
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, with the transport method standing out at 450,000
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. In terms of books, it made up about 300,000
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of France’s expenditure which was 100,000
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less than the
UK
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. As for computers and cars, they consisted of approximately 420,000
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and 350,00
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of people’s spending in both 2 nations, respectively. Looking at the remaining categories where the expenditure was less considerable, perfume accounted for roughly 200,000
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in the Fance, doubling that in the
UK
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.
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, more than 350,000
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were spent on cameras in the
UK
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, nearly thrice more than the France.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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