You are living in a Univercity residence , and you have problem with the high levels of noise from a new cafe which open is late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the newly opened Campus restaurant. I have been studying at

this

University for three years. I started hearing unusual noises from the eating place. I am extremely disappointed with the eatery.

Firstly

this

place opens at night when all the students are about to sleep. The restaurant caused not only sleeplessness but

also

nervousness. I am afraid that

this

problem is the result of my study.

In addition

, there were loud music and a crowd of people until midnight. Being in

this

situation I can concentrate my mind on studying. I would be grateful if you could control

this

restaurant's closing hours. I look forward to your reply and resolution to my problem at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely , Yulduz Uzoqova

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task response

Ensure that the content directly addresses the task question regarding the noise issue and its impact on the writer's life.

coherence cohesion

The structure is fairly coherent, but some paragraphs lack a clear single idea. Consider organizing the content into more distinct paragraphs.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely.

grammatical range

The grammar is relatively accurate, but some sentence structures are awkward. Aim for more varied and complex sentence structures.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

134 words

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You are living in a Univercity residence , and you have problem with the high levels of noise from a new cafe which open is late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter.

Word Count

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what rneasures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Sport is becoming a business. More and more companies ar Do you think that it is a positive or negative development?

The Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?