You are living in a Univercity residence , and you have problem with the high levels of noise from a new cafe which open is late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the newly opened Campus restaurant. I have been studying at

this

University for three years. I started hearing unusual noises from the eating place. I am extremely disappointed with the eatery.

Firstly

this

place opens at night when all the students are about to sleep. The restaurant caused not only sleeplessness but

also

nervousness. I am afraid that

this

problem is the result of my study.

In addition

, there were loud music and a crowd of people until midnight. Being in

this

situation I can concentrate my mind on studying. I would be grateful if you could control

this

restaurant's closing hours. I look forward to your reply and resolution to my problem at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely , Yulduz Uzoqova

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

134 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are living in a Univercity residence , and you have problem with the high levels of noise from a new cafe which open is late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter.

Word Count

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Today,many people do not know their neighbours in large cities.What problems does this cause?What can be done about this?

Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

international sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific example.

In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?