Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a great development in the agricultural department in recent years. On the one hand , a group of individuals believes that it is beneficial to modify the
crops
genetically for a healthy diet. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some people think that Linking Words
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practice is hazardous for nature . I am inclined towards the former notion. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both views and will elaborate on my opinion.
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To begin
with , making slight changes in the Linking Words
crops
at the gene level is a significantly healthy step. Use synonyms
This
is because, by Linking Words
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method, more nutritious fruits and vegetables can be yielded, which are good for physical well-being. Linking Words
For example
, the National Agricultural Department of India started growing different types is bananas by means of gene therapy . Interestingly , they contain calcium 10 times higher than the normal bananas which are found to be good for bone health as it speeds up the mineralisation of bones. Linking Words
Additionally
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practice can add up the variety in the world of fruits , vegetables, Linking Words
wheats
and so on.
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wheat
kinds of wheat
ears of wheat
In contrast
, a few masses suggest that we should not play with the interior structure as a natural product as it is risky. Linking Words
In other words
, manipulating the genetic structure can lead to Linking Words
extinction
of the original species. For instance, Denmark is using a new type of grapes which is genetically a combination of grapes and apples. Surprisingly, they are sweeter and larger than the normal ones. Add an article
the extinction
As a result
, the original grapes have disappeared from there. Linking Words
However
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this
is not a major issue because Linking Words
crops
are not changed completely with genetic modification and they hold the same traditional value as the original ones.
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To conclude
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,
genetically tailored Remove the comma
apply
crops
cause vanishment of the old traditional Use synonyms
crops
, Use synonyms
this
practice gives numerous new ranges of species and has more health benefits than before. Linking Words
Thus
, I consider it a great development.Linking Words
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Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion should be more developed, providing clearer summaries of the two viewpoints and the writer's opinion. The link between ideas within paragraphs could be strengthened to improve the logical flow of the essay.
Task Achievement
The response provides a basic discussion of both views, but more depth and analysis is needed to fully address the task. More nuanced discussion of the potential benefits and dangers of genetically modified crops is required.