The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide information about the proportion of the most merits and demerits of Bowen
Island
based on a survey of
visitors
. At first glance, it is readily noticeable that the high cost of living dominated the proportion of the most common disadvantages of staying in Bowen
Island
.
In contrast
, the aspect for people who resided on the
island
reported the most common advantage. Looking at the chart, half of the
visitors
stated that the high cost of living contributed as the primary drawback, it was followed by the entertainment side which accounted for a quarter of total
visitors
. There was a mere 5% difference in weather and food quality reasons. Moving, 47% of
visitors
argued that people in Bowen
Island
become the most common advantage, the proportion of the scenery side was much bigger compared to two other advantages, making up slightly just over a third per cent. In terms of good accommodation and culture accounted for 11% and 12% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • According to the survey
  • Visitors reported
  • The pie charts show
  • The most common advantages/disadvantages
  • A significant proportion
  • A small percentage
  • In contrast
  • Notably
  • The largest segment
  • Similarly
  • On the other hand
  • A major advantage/disadvantage
  • To highlight
  • Overall effect
  • Impact the experience
  • In summary
  • Illustrates
  • Reflects
  • Highlights
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