The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The graph presents the average carbon dioxide emissions per individual in four different countries in each ten years from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, Both Linking Words
United
Kingdom and Sweden Correct article usage
the United
are
the highest Verb problem
have
in
carbon dioxide emissions. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, the two Linking Words
country
showed a significant decrease. Change to a plural noun
countries
On the other hand
, Italy and Portugal were the lowest in carbon dioxide emissions but they started to increase.
In Sweden, they reached the peak with more than 10 Linking Words
tones
per Use synonyms
person
, Use synonyms
then
it showed the most enormous decrease to end up with less than 6 Linking Words
tones
per Use synonyms
person
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
United
Kingdom showed a gradual decline, they started with around 11 Correct article usage
the United
tones
per individual and Use synonyms
they end
up with approximately 9 Wrong verb form
ended
tones
per individual.
Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
tones
per Use synonyms
person
increased in Italy and Portugal. Portugal started with the lowest Use synonyms
tones
among all countries with less than two and Use synonyms
then
increased rapidly to almost 6 per Linking Words
person
. Italy began with almost 4 per Use synonyms
person
and Use synonyms
growed
to be almost 8 per Correct your spelling
grew
person
.Use synonyms
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