The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph presents the average carbon dioxide emissions per individual in four different countries in each ten years from 1967 to 2007.

Overall

, Both

United

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the United

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Kingdom and Sweden

are

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have

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the highest

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apply

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carbon dioxide emissions.

Additionally

, the two

country

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showed a significant decrease.

On the other hand

, Italy and Portugal were the lowest in carbon dioxide emissions but they started to increase. In Sweden, they reached the peak with more than 10

tones

per

person

then

it showed the most enormous decrease to end up with less than 6

tones

per

person

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United

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Kingdom showed a gradual decline, they started with around 11

tones

per individual and

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up with approximately 9

tones

per individual.

However

, the

tones

per

person

increased in Italy and Portugal. Portugal started with the lowest

tones

among all countries with less than two and

then

increased rapidly to almost 6 per

person

. Italy began with almost 4 per

person

and

growed

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grew

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to be almost 8 per

person

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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