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Public libraries will soon now longer be housed in a building as all facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries only existing online

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Recently, technology has become a massive movement in every aspect of our lives, including in the literature area. Books which not only provided in hardcopy but
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 in softcopy that can be sent and read to everyone who wants to read them.
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 phenomenon
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 affects the
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 revolution that will not require physical building more,
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, it will be provided online to access their
book
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. It could make the
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 system more flexible, but might have a long-term effect on the reader’s eyesight and limit some
people
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. One of the benefits of online public
libraries
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 is that the reader can read a
book
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 from anywhere and at any time, as long as they connect to the
internet
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.
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, we don’t need to walk among bookshelves anymore if we want to search a
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,
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, we only type the
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’s title or the author, so, it saves our time.
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, when my friend was doing their tasks and he needed some references soon, he accessed the online
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 provided by the university, and
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, it could be finished on time.
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, online
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 have several drawbacks. If we want to explore a
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 or a
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, it makes us watch our screen longer and
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 in the long-term our eyes become dry and it will reduce our eyesight little by little.
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, online
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 can make
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 confused, especially for unfamiliar technology users like elderly
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 or someone with limited
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 access who has never used it.
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, my grandmother really likes to go to the
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 and she loves books so much, but she doesn't have much in common with technology. If the
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 was only provided through the
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, it might be difficult for her. In conclusion, online
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 are just like both sides of the coin. It has many advantages in flexibility, but it
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 has several downsides for our health and some
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 who are unfamiliar with the
internet
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.

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