Some people claim that arts such as painting and music cannot affect people’s lives directly. The government should spend money on other things. what is your opinion?

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of whether government should allocate money for other useful things

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because of its negligible impact on people’s daily lives.

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I acknowledge that

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may be

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to some extent, I am of the opinion that funding for people’s basic needs and

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system

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more beneficial.

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, it is reasonable that

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as painting and music

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advantageous to some extent. One of the major benefits which are derived from

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is that it may teach students about their own culture and

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. In fact,

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is a theoretical subject with traditional teaching methods which might not motivate students to actively engage in

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interactive class activities.

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, thanks to

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like drawings, sculpture or

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songs, students might be aware of the importance of

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and culture;

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, they will study these subjects in earnest.

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, they can have a deep understanding of their own origins and national identities, leading to

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higher levels of patriotism and civic duty. Despite the aforementioned benefits, there is no doubt that spending money

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other pressing social issues is more

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. One of the things which the government should channel money into is people’s basic necessities. Indeed, citizens in some countries

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from natural disasters which trigger many difficulties they have to struggle with on

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regular basis.

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, the

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in some

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affected severely by

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or typhoons often are faced with

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of food or accommodations, proportionally being vulnerable to nutritional deficiency or disease.

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, the local authorities should prioritize

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these problems over

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. Another one is

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system. In reality, public hospitals in rural

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are not equipped with modern medical infrastructure;

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, the locals are inclined to flock to

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hospitals to access high-quality medical services which might put a heavy strain on hospitals in urban

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.

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, the government should invest in healthcare facilities, reducing the imbalance among different

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. In conclusion,

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may be advantageous to a certain degree by virtue of

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artistic expression in terms of

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and culture, I espouse the notion that the state’s budget investing in other things is more encouraging on the basis of the aforementioned reasons.