Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Other humans consider that young persons out to

work

non-profitable job in the

sorrounding

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surrounding

area during their spare

time

.It can be an advantage to them and to the society

also

.In my opinion, I agree that

using

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their free

time

helping

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the

community

they will gain experience and make developments in those

areas

.

Firstly

, some human beings think it likely that, if children use their access

time

to help the places around working for nothing in return they will get

first hand

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experience and skills that can upgrade their daily life.Since they are used to

work

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working

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, some hard jobs will be easier

to

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for

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them

due to

many

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tactics they

are

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already learned.

Secondly

, teenagers have more energy to do

work

, so they can

work

even for free because of

less

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fewer

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responsibilities as compared to adults and others do it for passion to know

variety

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a variety

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of

works

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work

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in future.

For example

, if an adolescent started brick-laying at the age of fourteen, it might

possible

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be possible

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to be an expert in that field in the next coming decade and becoming

self- employed

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self-employed

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. To add on, youth can

also

provide positive achievement and

resourses

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resources

to

the

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apply

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society by using their spare

time

doing activities in the

community

without receiving money.

Develpoment

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Development

and improvement

whic

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which

is a benefit to the remote

areas

,

for instance

, some

of

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apply

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rural

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the rural

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areas

does

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do

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not have public toilets and boreholes.

Therefore

young persons can

built

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build

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bathrooms and drill boreholes

on

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in

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their free period.

As a result

, rural dwellers benefited

with

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from

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clean and protected water and using

loo

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all the

time

especially

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, especially

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in very busy

areas

.

In addition

, teenagers can

also

form groups and create

programms

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programmes

programs

to clean the cities.

For instance

, in my country children every

last

Friday of the month they gather and pick up litter and sweep the streets,

this

will

also

help the

community

in terms of paying workers since those younger

once

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apply

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they

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do it for free.From the age of thirteen to eighteen, they can

also

give assistance to the

vulnerables

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vulnerable

those who

does'nt

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don't

have money to pay housemaids and

care givers

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caregivers

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. In conclusion, I believe that both

community

and juveniles could be advantageous at the same

time

gained skills if teenagers

volunteer

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serve non-monetary jobs which can help them to alleviate poverty in their future

life

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lives

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.