Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.

It is true that
school
studies
are
useful
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more useful
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that
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than
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learning outside the
school
.
While
some
people
tend towards the viewpoint that learning outside the
school
is most important.I would like to support the idea that
school
learning is more important than outside the
school
. On one side, it is understandable for some
people
to believe that learning outside the
school
is better than learning in
school
.One of the main reasons is that
people
think that
school
learning is the basis of education.
This
means that
school
studies
only teach
student
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students
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knowledge but not how to live in reality.
School
studies
only for academics but not
common
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the common
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sense of life.When
students
grow up they will find that they are hard to join the society.
For example
, if
students
learn some comics and magazines can inspire
them
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their
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ideas
become
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to become
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more funny and interesting
people
.
On the other hand
, it is more convincing to me that
school
studies
is
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are
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important
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more important
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than learning outside.
Firstly
, I think that when
school
time
students
just need to know to be a
student
,they need to focus on their
study
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studies
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.
This
is because,during
this
period the
student
is innocent, if they too early touch the outside world too, it may easily make the
student
go the wrong way.
Secondly
,the fact that various reading materials
also
deserve our attention.
In other words
, it is hard to control what
students
read outside.Nowadays, a lot of unhealthy books or videos try to Infiltrate the
student
so
school
is the only way to make sure the
student
studies
. In conclusion,
although
some
people
think that learning outside is better than
school
. It seems to me that
school
studies
are useful.
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