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Today many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problem does this cause? What can be sone to solve this?

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Nowadays, there are vast
numer
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numbers
 of
city
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a city
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 dweller who
do
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does
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 not know who their neighbours
is
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are
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 in the same neighbourhood
as a consequence
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 of lacking
of
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communication between them.
Though
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this
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 circumstance can be tackled by improving the
people
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's
comunicative
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communicative
communication
 skills and
relationship
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. The main factor of
this
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 problem
is
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came from the lack of communication of the city's inhabitants.
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 is the result of the feeling that their
neighbour
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 is distrustful, which
make
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makes
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 them
became
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 alert and avoid
to communicate
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communicating
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 with
the
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unknown
people
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.
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, it is
some time
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 very sensitive that they might hear about their nearby's background, their
nextdoor
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next door
neighbour
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 might
got
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get
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 into a sue, or some serious crime, which
make
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makes
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 the
distant
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 between them become longer and longer
for instance
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.
This
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 circumstance can be tackled by improving the resident's social skills and friendship of them with their
neighbour
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.
People
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 should be encouraged to
be come
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become
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 confidence and friendly with other
people
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 who live in the same
neigbourhood
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neighbourhood
.
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, the residents should actively try to talk with their
neighbour
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, or invite them to a party, a
heart warming
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heartwarming
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 meal, they
also
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 should frequently keep in touch with their
neighbour
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, too .
To conclude
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, there are
vast
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numer
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number
 of
city
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a city
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 dweller who
do
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does
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 not know who their neighbours
is
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are
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 in the same neighbourhood
as a result
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 of lacking
of
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apply
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communication, but
this
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 can
be solve
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be solved
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 by upgrading the friendship of the residents with their
neighbour
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.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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