A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks

Nowadays, the majority of

people

prefer travelling, and many countries take

benefits

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of it as generating more revenue.

However

, the wrong management of the

tourism

sector can lead to economic downturns of governments.

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essay will argue that the merits of

tourism

surpass its demerits in terms of

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of novel workplaces and the reputation of the

country

. Increasing

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damage in the areas where tours are organized is one of

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aspects of touristry and

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because of poor governance. So, a horse of tourists

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that they have paid money and have

right

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to abuse.

For instance

, the statistics of BMT indicate that every year historical and natural parts of

touristic

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places all over the world face pollution and other problems in order to not obey rules by tourists. ,

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kind of movement of

people

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depend on their personality, the governments and

people

around the world make

decision

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a decision

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that

tourism

is

reason

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for

lossing

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losing

of cultural and

ecologial

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ecological

sources.

On the other hand

,

touristry

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is considered the main source of budget because if

this

field is enhanced in a

country

, human beings, who are skilled in

this

area, encounter new work opportunities.

Furthermore

,

people

,who are fond of travelling, search for a place where they want to go and may share sight-seeing parts of

this

country

on social media and it causes recognition of the

country

by a significant number of

people

.

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, a recent study by Umut

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is professor at

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Galatasaray University, states that the GDP of Turkey surged by approximately 15 per cent and 80 per cent of the world population has information about Turkey`s famous cities thanks to

tourism

.

Thus

, the proper governing of

this

sector will have more positive effects on the financial situation of

thecountry

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the country

. In conclusion, I believe that the

tourism

sector has more advantages as more

knowing

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of the

country

and a reduction in unemployment despite

of

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its minor downsides as harming beautiful places.