In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement.

Nowadays most
people
turned
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down buying
newspapers
because they have been spread all around the internet. I totally agree with
this
statement because why buy
newspapers
when
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you
can them online for free? In
this
essay
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I am going to list the reasons
of
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why I support
this
opinion.
Firstly
, many countries today stopped selling physical
newspapers
and started sharing their
news
on the internet with
monthly
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a monthly
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subscription, and
this
have
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many advantages and one of them is saving trees from being cut down. To illustrate, the
NewYork
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Times newspaper stopped selling
newspapers
from
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in
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2009 and started selling their service online for only 10 dollars a month, and many
people
find
this
beneficial because it saves their time and the environment.
Secondly
,
people
also
find it more convenient to read the
news
on the web, and
this
is
due to
many websites that offer
this
service for free.
For example
, almost on all social media
platforms
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you can read the
news
from your home
,
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because the
news
are
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being spread widely on
such
platforms. In summary, in the
ner
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future
people
will stop buying printed
newspapers
for several reasons and the most important ones are to save the environment and
due to
many websites that offer
this
service for free.
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