More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and many are endangered. What are the causes of it and what measures can be taken to solve it?
Nowadays, the number of endangered
animals
have
been increasing. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
This
growth concerns a lot of people who are trying hardly
to avoid it. That’s why in Change the word
hard
this
essay, I am going to discuss some reasons of
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for
this
rise and possible solutions.
Firstly
, one of the most significant causes is the
climate Correct article usage
apply
changes
, which effects are putting in danger a lot of species. Fix the agreement mistake
change
For example
, the warming of the oceans is like a big fire inside the water. As a result
, many coral reef
are Change to a plural noun
reefs
in
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at
rick
of extinction. Correct your spelling
risk
Moreover
, due to
the
global Correct article usage
apply
warming
many Add a comma
warming,
animals
have change
their migration patterns because they cannot Change the verb form
changed
fine
food or water. Sadly, there is no gold key to stop it. Correct your spelling
find
Therefore
, biologists are conserving the strongest animals
.
Secondly
, the illegal hunting. There are many countries where governments don’t have any laws which regulates
or Change the verb form
regulate
penalizes
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penalize
to seek
out and Change the verb form
seeking
kill
endangered Wrong verb form
killing
animals
for sport or joy. For instance
, in Faroes
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the Faroes
Islands
there is a day Add a comma
Islands,
in
which the community celebrates Change preposition
on
the
killer Correct article usage
apply
whales
hunting. The same happened in China or Japan Fix the agreement mistake
whale
that
is legal to fish whales or in many countries of Africa that during many years it Correct pronoun usage
it
was allow
to hunt elephants and giraffes. Ergo, to stop illegal hunting, governments should ban Change the verb form
was allowed
this
actions.
In conclusion, as Correct determiner usage
these
humans
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human
being
and a part of Replace the word
beings
this
gorgeous planet we should start to do something to preserve the
natureCorrect article usage
apply
,
because we are part of it and if we don’t take action Remove the comma
apply
in
some point we will be Change preposition
at
also
endangered
Correct article usage
an endangered
specie
.Fix the agreement mistake
species
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- Introduction
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- Conclusion
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