More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and many are endangered. What are the causes of it and what measures can be taken to solve it?

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animals

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been increasing.

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growth concerns a lot of people who are trying

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to avoid it. That’s why in

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essay, I am going to discuss some reasons

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this

rise and possible solutions.

Firstly

, one of the most significant causes is

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climate

changes

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, which effects are putting in danger a lot of species.

For example

, the warming of the oceans is like a big fire inside the water.

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, many coral

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are

in

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rick

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of extinction.

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,

due to

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global

warming

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many

animals

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their migration patterns because they cannot

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food or water. Sadly, there is no gold key to stop it.

Therefore

, biologists are conserving the strongest

animals

.

Secondly

, the illegal hunting. There are many countries where governments don’t have any laws which

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or

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to seek

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out and

kill

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endangered

animals

for sport or joy.

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, in

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there is a day

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which the community celebrates

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killer

whales

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hunting. The same happened in China or Japan

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is legal to fish whales or in many countries of Africa that during many years it

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to hunt elephants and giraffes. Ergo, to stop illegal hunting, governments should ban

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actions. In conclusion, as

humans

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being

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and a part of

this

gorgeous planet we should start to do something to preserve

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nature

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because we are part of it and if we don’t take action

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some point we will be

also

endangered

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specie

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.