In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

The line graph demonstrates data on the changes in the numbers of average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries, namely

UK

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,

Sweden

, Italy and Portugal in the middle of 1967 and 2007.

Overall

, the graph indicates that Portugal and Italy had an increase.

In contrast

,

Sweden

and the

UK

showed a decline.

In addition

, the figures for the

UK

were generally the highest

while

the figures for Portugal were generally the lowest.

To begin

with, Italy fluctuated between 1967 to 2007, reaching a peak of 7,8 in 1997. The figures for Portugal rose significantly, hitting the highest numbers, about 5,7

of

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metric tonnes, in 2007

Sweden

and the

UK

followed an opposite trend,

Sweden

experienced a considerable drop from 1967 to 2007, there was a peak at 10,2 in 1977

while

in 2007

Sweden

hit the lowest

numbers

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number

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of metric tonnes. The

UK

saw a significant

decreased

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in 2007