Nowadays a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

More and more businesses are constructing

one

space

for their

employees

rather than dividing it into parts.

Although

having separate

rooms

can come as a huge advantage when it comes to individual

work

, I think,

benefits

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of having

one

space

outweigh the drawbacks because

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work

is considered to bring increased

work

efficiency. Private

space

for

employees

is advantageous as they can be more efficient when they have to accomplish projects not as a

team

but individually.

This

is because no

one

will be distracting them in their office compared to

one

hall where everyone is present.

As a result

, they are more likely to meet the deadlines.

In addition

, people usually feel more relaxed when they are on their own.

This

can be seen in formal occasions when people are obliged to sit in socially acceptable

position

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positions

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but once they arrive

their

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home or for a convenient

for

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them

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place, they are free to take a posture comfortable for them.

Therefore

, open areas in offices

seems

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to put unnecessary pressure on

employees

in

this

regard. 

However

, I think there are more benefits

on

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building

one

space

because companies can avoid extra expenditure on

construction

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the construction

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of the workplace and it leads to better collaboration among

colleagues

.

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Businessmen

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Businessman

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will not have to spend more finances on separating the

rooms

and in turn will be able to save some money, since building every wall adds to the price of construction.

In addition

, in order to separate private

space

for every worker company should have a bigger building in comparison to

one

big

space

.

This

is because

colleagues

can sit next to

one

another when everyone works together compared to private

rooms

where every worker should have a bigger

space

.  Another argument is that, as workers are always in

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one

place, they will be communicating more with each other compared to private offices where even if

one

has a question,

he\she

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she

is not likely to ask

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colleagues

since they may feel a burden to go out of their

rooms

. Once workers start to exchange ideas, they will start to

work

as a

team

and

team

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teamwork

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work

not only contributes to having closer

bond

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bonds

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among

colleagues

but

also

to the rise of

creativeness

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.

This

will result in better projects in turn increasing revenues of the corporation. In conclusion, even if having a private office is good for working individually it is

team

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teamwork

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work

which brings better

relationship

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relationships

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among

employees

and better income to the business.