Map describes a changing of city in 1936 and 2007

Map describes a changing of city in 1936 and 2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Map describes a changing of city in 1936 and 2007
The given map portrays the development of a city among city seven decades (from 1936 to 2007)
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in the past there were
areas
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for nature and a few buildings,
while
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in 2007 there were many entertainment places that reduced green
areas
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.
To begin
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with, it was easy to find greenery places in 1936 since there were many trees, rivers, and farmland next to government offices. The city
also
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provided a cycle path which was located not too far from the flower shop. In the centre, there was a post office, candy shop, meat shops, a florist, a bank, and a library. Meanwhile, in 2007, the number of trees
were
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was
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reduced from three to one and there were residential
areas
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changing the river. Another thing to add is the farmland had changed becoming a golf yard, and a museum was built beside it.
Moreover
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,
supermarket
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the supermarket
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had expanded their size taking over the candy and meat shop
areas
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. Travel agent p had changed the florist position. Some were
add
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added
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some road opposite the museum.
In addition
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, in 2007, there was a big shopping centre around the markets.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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