Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, environmental
problems
have become a trending issue all over the Use synonyms
world
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While
it is argued that the loss of different animals and plants is one of the most concerning Linking Words
problems
, others think that air pollution and global warming should be considered more alarming Use synonyms
problems
.
It is certainly true that in a biological cycle, all living organisms are dependent on each other because of their food chain. To illustrate, if a certain animal dies out somehow, it will affect other species both directly and indirectly. Use synonyms
That is
why, it's difficult to survive for those animals or plants who are living in a place where the food chain has been broken. Linking Words
To sum up
, the extinction of species is very concerning for both humans and other living beings.
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On the other hand
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apart from
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this
environmental issue, there are a wide variety of environmental Linking Words
problems
which have many detrimental effects on the people. Use synonyms
For example
, because of the usage of excessive amounts of non-renewable energies, the temperature of the whole Linking Words
world
is increasing abruptly, as the ozone layer is continuously decaying, which saves us from the direct heat of the sun. Use synonyms
Hence
, global warming is becoming a bad alert, as it is making the Linking Words
world
unsuitable for living. Use synonyms
As a result
, 25% of land in the southern part of Bangladesh is on the verge of extinction, which directly affects all the species. Another problem is air pollution because of the increasing number of advanced industrialisation and vehicles, which leads to creating different health diseases like heart failure, insomnia and asthma. Linking Words
Thus
, these Linking Words
problems
make our lives difficult to exist in the Use synonyms
world
.
After comparing the arguments, I think that there are more environmental issues, considered dangerous Use synonyms
instead
of the loss of plants and animals. In conclusion, though the loss of living organisms is harmful to the environment, still environmental Linking Words
problems
like air pollution and global warming are creating alarming concern because it makes allUse synonyms
life
beings unstable.Replace the word
living
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