The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts
ilustrate
three types of meals Correct your spelling
illustrate
contained
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containing
carbohydrate
, protein and fat levels. All data presents
as Wrong verb form
is presented
percentage
.
Add an article
a percentage
Overall
, all three types of diet
have more carbohydrate
than other Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
nutretions
and Correct your spelling
nutrients
healthy
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a healthy
diet
and healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport have more than half of carbohydrate
.
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carbohydrates
In the
Average meal plan accounted Change preposition
The
40
% Change preposition
for 40
prorotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
carbohydrate
and protein, both have Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
same
percentages. Correct article usage
the same
In
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This
this
diet
has 20% of
fat which is the Change preposition
apply
less
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least
include
Wrong verb form
included
neutrition
in the average meal plan.
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nutrition
However
, healthy
meal has 50% of Add an article
the healthy
a healthy
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
while
protein accounted
Wrong verb form
accounts
30
% and fat Change preposition
for 30
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounts
20
%. In healthy Change preposition
for 20
diet
has half of carbohydrate
. In contrast
, healthy
sports meal plan has 60% Correct article usage
a healthy
of
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apply
carbohydrate
, which is more Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
that
half Correct word choice
than
proportion
of Correct article usage
a proportion
total
meal. In Correct article usage
the total
this
diet
has 25% of protien
and 15% of fat.
Correct your spelling
protein
Average
Correct article usage
The average
diet
and Healthy
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a Healthy
diet
contain same
amount of fat which is 20% and Change the article
the same
average
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the average
diet
Change noun form
diet's
carbohydrate
and protien
level is Correct your spelling
protein
same
.Correct article usage
the same
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrate, diet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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