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Students should not be allowed to use any technology in class till an appropriate age. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A wide variety of different digital resources are used nowadays in educational institutes.
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, using technology in classrooms under an appropriate age might be a controversial question. I firmly believe that even the youngest students should have the opportunity to learn at
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. In
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. There is no doubt that technology has a really important role in the future of humanity,
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 it is fundamental to teach younger generations how to
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 the numerous advantages of the
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. Even the first graders can find online exercises for themselves to improve their reading,
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, logical or writing skills in an enjoyable way. So is,
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, the LearningApps platform, where
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 can find online exercises to practice in any subject. It is
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 of different digital resources at
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 provides safety for
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. In my personal experience, most of the
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 age are already using their parents’ digital devices.
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, learning at
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 how to
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 in a responsible way can prevent
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children
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, if they learn about the dangers of
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online presence in a safe environment, they will not fall for deceptions. In conclusion, we cannot ignore the fact that using the different technological devices in a confident way
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 part of the general knowledge.
Children
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, and even small
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 should learn the required skills as soon as possible, and master how to
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 for their own benefit.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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