Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Waste
is occupying most of living land for major parts of the world. It is believed that waste
production is increasing on a daily basis. This
essay will discuss the reasons behind this
issue and suggest some possible solutions from the government
to reduce its volume.
To begin
with, there are several reasons behind its increment. The first one is a lack of awareness among the individuals. Most of citizens
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the citizens
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of
countries
such
as Pakistan, Iraq and India are not aware of the types of waste
. For instance
, people in such
countries
are not aware of recycling and reusable items. As a result
, they usually throw an item which can be re-used for their purpose. In order to improve this
, the government
should be running an awareness campaign. There should be regular government
events in a community park or mall where they teach techniques to reuse waste
for different purposes.
In addition
, there is no equipment for them to divide their garbage
into different categories. To give an example, in developed countries
namely USA and Canada, local people divide their waste
into two different waste
bins i.e. Recycle Bin and Garbage
Bin. These bins are also
being provided by their government
. However
, such
resources are not being provided to people in developing countries
. This
results in having all garbage
thrown together where reusable items are scrapped as well. To reduce this
, government
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the government
such
equipment to its citizens with knowledge on
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Furthermore
, they can arrange weekly garbage
trucks to collect these different types of waste
.
To conclude
, lack of knowledge and resources are the two main reasons behind waste
being produced in large quantities. However
, the government
can run an alertness campaign and contribute some funds to their waste
management system which includes teaching them to use two different kinds of garbage
bins. This
will help to reduce its production.Submitted by destroyerblackhood2302 on
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