You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about discontinue of my part-time evening course in Business Management.
As a full-time worker, it is tough for me to manage the time between my studies and work. Lately, I have been working overtime to support my new project
. As a result
, I am mentally tired at the end
of the day, reducing my efficiency and focus on my academic study.
I would like to take a break from my study as I have recently started leading an important project
at my workplace which includes working physically at my workplace which is out of town. As part of my duties, I am required to plan the outline of the project
and have things documented and assigned to the team which I find tough while
managing my study.
I am planning to discontinue my course by next week. I am planning to continue this
course at the end
of my project
which would be around next year's summer.
Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Kunj SoniSubmitted by destroyerblackhood2302 on
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task response
Ensure to fully address each point in the prompt to enhance task response
coherence cohesion
Maintain coherence and cohesion through the appropriate use of paragraphing and linking words
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used to express ideas more precisely
grammatical range
Employ a wider range of complex structures to demonstrate grammatical accuracy and flexibility
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite