The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the formation process of
salmon
in three different stages.
Overall
, we can see that they begin with fry
fish and finish with adult Replace the word
fried
salmon
. Besides
, it takes nearly ten years for the life cycle of salmon
Firstly
, big salmon
will lay eggs in the upper river
and those eggs turn into fries with a length of 3-8 cm. After that, small fish move to the lower river
with fast flowing and they stay there for about 4 years.
Secondly
, when they leave the river
for the first time, the length of salmon
reaches between 12 to 15 cm, they will call smolt. In addition
, they move to the open sea and continue to live in the sea for four or four and a half years.
At
the end, before leaving the sea and returning to the upper Change the preposition
In
river
, the salmon
grow 70 to 76 cm in sizeSubmitted by yeshomeclass on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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