Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Animal testing is primarily being considered as a controversial issue, with respect to its unethical practice yet others think it remains important for scientific discoveries. Apparently, I personally opine to oppose
this
typical experimentation Linking Words
hence
using human tissue as one of the most common alternatives.
Essentially, conducting experiments on any living creatures, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
animals
, only for the importance of human life development is definitely an unfair practice. Use synonyms
For example
, the research and development unit of beauty cosmetics used to use ingredients from Linking Words
animals
' organs in the past, Use synonyms
such
as collagen collected from irritated cows or fish, to fulfil their customer's demands. Linking Words
Consequently
, those brands that are still committed to animal experimentation nowadays are being left by the consumers Linking Words
along with
the rising awareness of sustainability.
Alternatively, scientific discoveries should begin to shift by using human tissues Linking Words
instead
of threatening animal life. Linking Words
This
kind of tissue is donated from surgery, Linking Words
such
as biopsies, cosmetic surgery, and transplants. Linking Words
For instance
, the reconstituted human skin is being used to test the safety level of various consumable products, Linking Words
such
as sunscreen or moisturizer, before being commercialized in the market. Linking Words
Therefore
, scientific research could still be developing Linking Words
further
inventions without irritating Linking Words
animals
.
All things considered, animal testing is clearly a cruel conduct owing to its main purpose which is only intended for the betterment of human life and, thereby could not be justified by any law. After all, the use of human tissue is the best option to replace Use synonyms
animals
for Use synonyms
further
scientific discoveries.Linking Words
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