The bar chart below shows the top ten counties for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates ten countries that generated and consumed the biggest amount of electric
power
in the year 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a big difference in the data between the two biggest producers and consumers, which were China and America, and the rest of the listed states, while
Korea was the country that had the lowest scores in both areas for this
year. Germany could not provide the country's needs,
and used more electric Remove the comma
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power
than it fabricated.
In 2014 the major manufacturer of electricity was China with 5,398 billion
kWh
, strictly followed by the United States with 4,099 billion
kWh
. In addition
, they were also
the prime consumers, since they used almost all of their generated power
with 5,322 and 3,866 billion
kWh
, respectively. Next in descending order were Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and the Republic of Korea.
Korea was the country, which had the lowest numbers in both areas, from this
top ten list with only 485.1 billion
kWh
generated and 449.5 utilized in 2014. Over the period, Germany used 582.5 billion
kWh
of electric power
, while
the output was only 526.6.Submitted by delulcheva on
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