The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
The line graph compares the two genders in terms of their smoking rate per 1000
people
in Someland within the timespan of 40 years, commencing from 1960.
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Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were significant changes in the Linking Words
number
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people
who smoked of the two genders shown on the graph. Another striking feature is that the Use synonyms
number
of males saw a dramatic decrease over the 40-year period, Use synonyms
while
the rate of females increased slightly.
In 1960, men preferred smoking, at 600 Linking Words
people
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whereas
only around 100 women smoked. Over the following 15 years, the Linking Words
number
of females who smoked reached 300 Use synonyms
people
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however
, the figure for males dropped by 100 Linking Words
people
.
From 1975 to 1990, the smoking rate of the two genders fluctuated rapidly, hovering at around 400 Use synonyms
people
and approximately 300 respectively. By 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of men who smoked fell to only 350 Use synonyms
people
, Use synonyms
while
the figure for women saw a slight drop to 200 Linking Words
people
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