The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares three major cities, including
Paris
,
Dubai
, and
Sydney
, in terms of their average monthly temperature variations.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that
temperatures
in three cities oscillated widely throughout the year. Another striking feature is that all the figures ended up in the same
temperatures
as at the beginning of the year. In January,
Paris
had the lowest temperature, at 5
Celsius
,
while
temperatures
in
Dubai
and
Sydney
were around 20
Celsius
and 25
Celsius
respectively. Over the following 8 months, there was a significant increase in
temperatures
in
Dubai
and
Paris
of around 15
Celsius
, but the figure for
Sydney
fell by 10
Celsius
. From August to December, the respective number of
temperatures
in
Dubai
and
Paris
dropped dramatically to approximately 20
Celsius
and only 5
Celsius
.
By contrast
,
Sydney
saw a rise to around 25
Celsius
, hitting the highest heat compared to the two remaining cities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • line graph
  • trends
  • seasonal variations
  • temperature ranges
  • data points
  • climatic factors
  • latitude
  • correlations
  • anomalies
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • climate zones
  • thermometer readings
  • degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit
  • summertime
  • wintertime
  • meteorological
  • temperate
  • subtropical
  • mercury levels
  • interpolate
  • mean values
  • temperatures soar
  • temperatures plummet
  • heatwave
  • cold snap
  • mild
  • cool
  • warm
  • chilly
  • frigid
  • scorching
  • freezing
  • temperate
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