The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares store
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
in terms of the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shops
in one country within the timespan of 8 years, commencing from 2011.
Use synonyms
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were significant changes in both Linking Words
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
over the shown period. Another notable point is that Use synonyms
although
the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
exceeded that of closed Use synonyms
shops
in the first year, there were more stores that ceased to exist by the end of the period.
In 2011, the respective numbers of Use synonyms
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
were around 6500 Use synonyms
shops
and 8500 Use synonyms
shops
. Over the following 3 years, the closed Use synonyms
shops
saw a slight fluctuation, at over 6500 Use synonyms
shops
; Use synonyms
however
, the opened Linking Words
shops
dramatically decreased to approximately 6000 Use synonyms
shops
.
By 2015, the store Use synonyms
closures
plummeted sharply, hitting its lowest point at around 1000 Use synonyms
shops
, Use synonyms
while
there was a decrease of 2000 Linking Words
shops
in the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
. From 2016 to 2018, the Use synonyms
closures
rose to around 5000 Use synonyms
shops
, Use synonyms
then
oscillated steadily in the remaining periods, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of shop Use synonyms
openings
was lower, at 3000 Use synonyms
shops
in 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, number, shops with synonyms.
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