The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares store
closures
and openings
in terms of the number
of shops
in one country within the timespan of 8 years, commencing from 2011.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were significant changes in both closures
and openings
over the shown period. Another notable point is that although
the number
of new shops
exceeded that of closed shops
in the first year, there were more stores that ceased to exist by the end of the period.
In 2011, the respective numbers of closures
and openings
were around 6500 shops
and 8500 shops
. Over the following 3 years, the closed shops
saw a slight fluctuation, at over 6500 shops
; however
, the opened shops
dramatically decreased to approximately 6000 shops
.
By 2015, the store closures
plummeted sharply, hitting its lowest point at around 1000 shops
, while
there was a decrease of 2000 shops
in the number
of new shops
. From 2016 to 2018, the closures
rose to around 5000 shops
, then
oscillated steadily in the remaining periods, while
the number
of shop openings
was lower, at 3000 shops
in 2018.Submitted by miatr.work on
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